Stop saying “We’re thrilled to announce”
“We’re thrilled to announce” is filler. It adds no information and delays the point.
Instead of:
We’re thrilled to announce our partnership with X.
Just say:
We partnered with X.
Instead of:
We’re thrilled to announce we raised $Y.
Say:
We raised $Y.
If the news is exciting, the news will do the work. If the news isn't exciting, there's little you can do to change that.
