Stop Saying “We’re Thrilled to Announce”
“We’re thrilled to announce” is filler. It adds no information and delays the point.
Instead of:
> We’re thrilled to announce our partnership with X.
Just say:
> We partnered with X.
Instead of:
> We’re thrilled to announce we raised $Y.
Say:
> We raised $Y.
If the news is exciting, the news will do the work. If the news isn't exciting, there's little you can do to change that.